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    oops oops oops
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    Pretty good so far. Kept me interested to the end anyway. Curious to see where this is gonna go. Whats with the lizard?

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    oops oops oops
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    Interesting. A few typos and I was surprised Gail didnt drive the kids home, regardless of Bingo. Especially since she is concerned about Michelle, and concerned/angry with Mark.

    Apart from that, its solid work. Whatever next?

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