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September 8th, 2004, 12:57 AM
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Last edited by deanl; June 30th, 2013 at 07:55 PM.
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September 8th, 2004, 07:02 AM
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Pretty good so far. Kept me interested to the end anyway. Curious to see where this is gonna go. Whats with the lizard?
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September 8th, 2004, 10:34 AM
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Last edited by deanl; June 30th, 2013 at 07:55 PM.
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September 8th, 2004, 12:19 PM
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Interesting. A few typos and I was surprised Gail didnt drive the kids home, regardless of Bingo. Especially since she is concerned about Michelle, and concerned/angry with Mark.
Apart from that, its solid work. Whatever next?
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